The living island

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Just caught up to the latest chapter. I have to say, so far, this is a wonderful piece of work, the MC isn't just some other overpowered guy, he caries dept and let's us feel for him. The author does a good job shying away from the usual boring tropes. And he does a great job with the 1st person narration. This is a good read, no doubt.

"So much pressure!" Eric exclaimed. He only felt this pressure around Dylan and Elaine. 'Seems like we are a bit unique' Eric thought other people's ability would be as strong as them. Well, his ability doesn't count in the word 'strong'.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Only shooting stars

Name: Demonic Fire And Ice Dagger

Xi Mo laughed slightly and stood up, leaving the hidden part of the cave. Running through the passageway, he eventually got back to the large cave and climbed up out of it from the same spot as before. He looked down at his clothes and saw they were torn, so he figured he should return 'home' first and change.

Con confianza Ethan hizo unos estiramientos y comenzó a caminar lentamente haciendo un semi circulo alrededor de Violet, ella no realizó ningún otro movimiento más que seguir a Ethan con la mirada.